This poem really spoke to me. I love the sections; each one was its own little world and each was exciting in a different way. The opening stanza blew me away in its enjambment and imagery. Throughout the poem, I felt surprised and challenged, which feels especially Modernist. The language was not too academic to be exclusive. Overall, I found it to be a very enticing poem that sucked me in and really made me think.
Great work, Max. These poems are riddles!